Feedback on translation of excerpt from Soma Sutta

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Story of a nun's encounter with a māra?

As it happens, I just translated this yesterday. Here it is! #sn 5.2 With Somā At Sāvatthī. Then the nun Somā got dressed in the morning and, taking her bowl and robes, entered Sāvatthī for alms. She wandered for alms in Sāvatthī. After the meal, on her return from alms-round, she entered the Blind Man’s Wood and sat at the root of a tree for the day’s meditation. Then Māra the Wicked, wanting to make the nun Somā feel fear, terror, and goosebumps, wanting to make her fall away from conver…